Caligula's Launderette

that was a really bitchy comment from me, sorry I'm not usually like that. So... yeah the plink this is going, and I'll play around with the solid tears thing. ...

thanks for the review Cicero. It was very informative. So second stanza, I really don't think you understand why people use "styllistic" techniques and what it means to use them. ...

yeah, Jack I hear ya, there will be some definite revising soon. How very OCD of me to right that descriptively. I was trying parellel his living conditions with his ...

I love you Jack... Bernard Cornwall is my hero. But on Pratchett...I have Lord and Ladies and Soul Magic and Color of Magic, I thought most of them wer humerous, ...

for years I've been crying into a pillow full of goosedown the mantra of ghostkisses and spiderflys gnashing at my head my only thoughts are missing you you're a truebluekid ...

My apoligies guys, to save my writing I usually used my email but it's being I am posting this here. Its not all the second chapter so yeah I'll post ...

thanks hon. I really apreciate it. (I'm bumping this now) cheers CL

thanks you both. I'm bumping it now. CL

Thank god Brad for knocking some sense into me on this one. Well I've messed around with it some more and added a bit...well more than a bit. and thegirlwhofateloves: ...

just like Sureal said cept chocolate frostie instead of milk chocolate.

I want to thank Noxious for that wonderful informative review. The reason that that draft was so bad, as in had crap grammer was because I only had a half ...

I'm not sure if there is a topic like this on here, so I decided to start one for my own a discussion about poets and poetry...such as who is ...

Welcome to YWS! If you have any questions message Ari....hehehehe actually you can message me to I just like saying that. I go by CL here. or wierdo or nutcase ...

welcome friend! if you are wondering we're not all sane here really... if you have any questions feel free to message me... again welcome..and btw french rules! CL

a very happy birthday to you! YAY!!! cumpleanos feliz cumpleanos feliz bon aniversaire and all those lovely things. cheers CL